老年人对社会的贡献

雅思写作大作文题目

Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

老年人预期寿命与健康的提升意味着65岁以上的人群仍然可以过着圆满而充满活力的生活。那么社会能够从老年人可以做出的贡献中收获哪些好处呢？

雅思写作大作文范文

开头段

Generally speaking that older generation over sixty-five years old can do certain activities and can contribute to a great extent.I am quite sure that they could participate in some activities not only in the formal range but also in the informal area.I will outline two ways in which people can get benefits of this interest.

通常来说，六十五岁以上的老一代可以从事某些活动，并且可以做出很大的贡献。我非常确定，他们不仅可以参加正式活动，还可以参加非正式活动。我将概述人们可以从这种利益中受益的两种方式。

主体段1

Becoming involved in the family’s special occasions is one of the ways in which the elderly can contribute.The woman older relatives could share the recipes of traditional meals and the men could share their opinions and interests in traditional games that they used to play in the past.Hence,younger relatives will be happier because they might feel more complete.The marriage couple could get some tips on how to build a happy family from them.Gathering with whole family members can increase happiness.

参与家庭的特殊场合是老年人做出贡献的方式之一。年长的女性亲戚可以分享传统饮食的食谱，男人的可以分享他们的观点以及过去玩过的传统游戏。因此，年轻的亲戚会更快乐，因为他们可能会感到更完整。新婚夫妇可以从中得到一些有关如何建立幸福家庭的秘诀。与全家人聚会可以增加幸福感。

主体段2

Another way is the elderly can participate in the school.For instance,the school can contact local retired people for sharing their experience with pupils.I am quite sure that the children will be fascinated by the older people’s story about the circumstances in the past.They could give information about the vital links between previous live and present time.On the other hand,children can ask their grandparents for replacing their parents,due to families now more mobile,on career days.

另一种方法是老人可以参与到学校教育中。例如，学校可以联系当地退休人员，向学生分享他们的经验。我很确定孩子会被老年人关于过去情况的故事所着迷。他们可以提供有关过去和现在之间重要联系的信息。另一方面，由于家庭在工作上耗费的时间太多，孩子可以要求祖父母代替父母。

主体段3

Some professions like teaching,research,writing,mentoring requires experience and older people can contribute to these professions.For instance,an old professor can be a great resource for the research department in a college or university.

某些专业，例如教学，研究，写作，指导，需要经验，而老年人可以为这些专业做出贡献。例如，老教授可能是大学或大学研究部门的重要资源。

结论

In short,the older generation can bring some benefits to society.As our life expectancy improves,the need for the older generation’s contribution also should be increased.Making the elderly more active in society not only bring positive impact for them,but also for the young generation.

简而言之，老一辈可以为社会带来一些好处。随着我们预期寿命的提高，对老年人贡献的需求也应增加。使老年人更加积极地参加社会活动，不仅给他们带来积极的影响，而且也给年轻一代带来积极的影响。

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